Friday, November 11, 2011

Mage Soul - Chapter 1 - 2011NOV11

SUBMITTED FOR FEEDBACK - GRAMMAR, GAPS IN LOGIC OR STORY PLOT, UNBELIEVABLE CHARCTER BEHAVIOR 


METRY
Ket yawned in the afternoon sun, a sweet spring breeze ruffling her neck fur.  Weather in the very small kingdom of Wad was generally mild due to its fortunate location on the Sarten Sea where it formed the land bridge between semi-arid tracts of land, the one on the west belonging to the Ronais and to the East, Lar Kethia.  Both of Wad’s neighbors coveted her rich orchards and deep harbors, but wanted nothing to do with the powerful magic rift slashing through the best of Wad’s countryside.  A trap for the unwary and an unpredictable cornucopia of strange beings and animals – or ‘riftugees’ as they were known to the jaded locals, The Rift was considered a blight on the land, one managed reluctantly by generations of locals whose children struggled with an increasing  variety of hazardous magical abilities.
The neighboring cultures of Ronais and Lar Kethia were as different from one another as possible: the tolerant Ronaislanders with their silks and powerful courtesans in bright contrast to the semi-nomadic Lar Kethians with their horse leathers, arrogance and rigid gender roles.  Fortunately sturdy little Wad was there in the middle to provide neutral ground for traders and diplomats to conduct business. 
If one was a spy, and Ket had on occasion been accused of being such a thing although her superiors made much finer distinctions on the subject of observing native populations, Wad was a low-stress assignment. At least it had been until recently when directions to expend their utmost energies in tracking down the latest source of trans-universal entangled magic had come to Ket and her peers.  Ket being Ket, this had not taken long.
The pungent scent of quantum magic tickled her nose.  Still unripe, it reminded her of hot iron and peaches.  She struggled to smother a sneeze, interested in the conversation going on nearby.  Perched on the ledge of a remarkably dirty window overlooking a narrow street that stank of rotting garbage, inadequate plumbing, and misfortune, she looked like any other lazy feline enjoying the late afternoon sun.  Ket licked a white and ginger paw, giving her troublesome nose an absent-minded swipe as she peered down at the two human females seated on the steps below. 
Her precautions were unnecessary.  The humans were deep in conversation, the old woman murmuring soothing words in the girl’s ear, one arm around her shoulder.   The skinny girl, with a rat’s tail of dark hair and bruises covering her arms, leaned forward, her gaze fixed on a weed forcing its way through a crack in the rockcrete.
“You’re a good girl Metry Wills.  Don’t let that sad man make you think any other way.  Ee’s just desperate for someone ‘sides himself to blame.”
Metry snorted.  Granny Kettlewash was the nearest thing she had to a mother, but she didn’t have to live with the old soak.  Sad.  Well that was one way to describe Fin Wills.  Mean was another.  She clutched her aching stomach where her father’s boot had left a big round bruise and wished herself far away with all the energy in her thirteen year old body.  The sound of a crash, followed by loud weeping made her look up at the taped kitchen window of the shack across the street and a few houses down.  Backlit against the brown paper she’d patched the window with, the shadow of a small man lurched, reaching for something then slipping abruptly out of view.  She leapt up, frightened.  “Fikk it all! E’s slipped again.” 
She might wish herself far away, but who would take care of her Da then?  Rift knew he needed someone to keep him from rotting in his own stink, and much though she hated it, Metry couldn’t just walk away.  Tomorrow morning he’d be sitting at their splintery table, holding his head and begging forgiveness.  She wasn’t sure she had any forgiveness left, but she told him she did anyway.  It was that or have him tag around after her, weeping and talking about how she was his “darling little girl” interspersed with the occasional threat to hunt her down like a sick dog if she tried to run.  So she stayed.  If the real truth were told, she had no idea where she’d go if she did decide to leave. 
Granny Kettlewash touched her elbow lightly, making Metry turn.  “Do you think it might be wise to let him set a bit?”  Their eyes met and Metry nodded.  “Yeah.  Might be.”  She sat down again with a sigh.  So what if he was lying there bleeding?  If she tried to take care of Da when he wasn’t clean passed out, she’d wake him.  Then he’d be grabbing her and wacking her with whatever came handy.  Hard drink did that to him, made him crazy, and she was tired.  More than anything she wanted to lay down somewhere private and dark and sleep for a week.  Getting by on fits and spurts of naps when Da was out of the house or sober left her feeling a bit drunk herself. 
“I’ve got a bit of apple cake set aside.  Hungry?”
The suggestion made Metry’s stomach rumble, at which Granny dug her cane into the step, levering herself to the hunched position that passed for upright.  Metry watched her rifle through the boxes and sacks in her small cart, all Granny Kettlewash had to call home.  When asked where she lived, the old woman invariably replied, “Oh, here and there.  Here and there.”  Metry didn’t know what that meant but was wise enough in the ways of West Enders not to push.  Peoples’ business was their business.  There was plenty about her and Da she didn’t care to discuss.  Granny no doubt had her reasons. 
Ket watched the two divide up a small brick of apple cake, the old woman cleverly working it so that Metry received the largest portion.  The girl was tall, 5’6” and growing.  With better feeding she would already be taller than her father.  Ket arched her neck, sniffing the air delicately to confirm her original guess.  Yes, the girl was just past her First Threshold.  Any incidental magic she might have would surface soon, held in check right now by the half-starved body’s inability to support the demands of normal Rift magic. 
“What am I gonna to do Granny?  He gets worse and worse.  Last Friday night he broke the only mage lamp that still worked, then walloped me the next day for it.  Seems he can’t remember what day it is, much less what he’s supposed to do.  He hasn’t brought silver home in weeks.  He’s down to borrowing from Ugly Jack, and talking about looking up The Todd.”  She shivered when she said it. 
Granny frowned, cutting her eyes to the patched kitchen window of Metry’s home.  “Did he now?  Jack’s not a good boy to cross, but The Todd is just askin’ to be dead.”
“I know!”  Metry exclaimed, feeling an electric surge of fear and desperation chase up her neck.  “Sometimes…” she broke off, then began again.  “Sometimes I just wish he get it over with.  Drink himself dead and be done with it.”  A fugitive tear slid from her eye.  Metry angrily dashed it away before it crested the sharp edge of her cheek bone.
“What would you do then?” The beginnings of evenfall shadowed the old woman’s face, but her voice was mild.
“Volunteer for extra Shared Service in a kitchen somewheres… least I’d eat then.  Apprentice myself for a trade.”
Granny nodded, “Sure.  But you’re not yet sixteen.  Have to be sixteen to ‘prentice.”
“Who’s to know?  You tellin’ anyone?  For that, you could tell ‘em I was sixteen.  Tell ‘em I’m your granddaughter.”  Metry was beginning to feel excited.  Maybe it was possible to escape.  “I could get out of here.  Get out of the West End altogether.”
“Oh sweetie.  I would.  I would.  I just can’t.  There’s mages at the Hall o’ Records.  Take your form and see it’s an untruth right off.”
The brief moment of excitement slid right out of Metry, leaving something cold and bleak in its wake.  “I hate mages.  Sneaking around.  Keeping you from doing things.  If I had my way I’d close the rifts altogether.  No more mages.  No more magic.” 
At that pronouncement, the ginger tabby’s bright orange tail shot straight up, the tip twitching back and forth energetically.  Now woudn’t that be interesting?  I’m afraid little girl, you’re going to be as much of a surprise to yourself as you are the rest of the mages of Wad… and elsewhere. 
Stretching herself on the window ledge, Ket lept down to the landing, slowing as she passed the girl.  Metry’s right hand reached out unconsciously, stroking the soft arched back several times.  The cat’s wrapped its tail around her wrist for a moment as Ket fed a small surge of healing up the girl’s arm.  Metry gave a small unconscious sigh of relief as she stroked the cat one more time, sensing its impatience to be off.  Having done what she could, Ket pranced down the remaining stairs, on her way to meet with an old friend.  It was clearly time to address the problem of Fin Wills and the witchy child who wasn’t actually his daughter.

Friday, July 8, 2011

Can You Hear Me Now

From the prompt (I think): A wish for someone else is granted.

by Dan Steinbacher

"I just wish you understood!' she had yelled at him, partly in anger, partly in exasperation. The argument had been going in circles for an hour and they were both physically and emotionally exhausted. The problem, as far as she could tell, was that not only did he not get "it", he didn't WANT to get it. He was actively choosing to not care, avoiding empathy at all costs and forcing ignorance onto his brain. And it worked. After a lifetime of willfull eye-closing, he couldn't understand a damn thing about anyone that wasn't him. You could see the apathy taking hold of him in the middle of a conversation, watch his eyes glaze over and functioning conciousness retreat into the background.

But after she had shouted at him, a strange look had dawned over his face, his forehead wrinkling as if he was trying to complete Chinese quadratic equations in his head. Then, without a word, he had left their apartment and that was the last she'd heard of him.

How could she have known that her wish would come true? How could she know the scope of what she wished for? Because now he did understand. He understood everything far, far too well. The man was paralyzed with understanding. He couldn't sleep, as the endless chanting of the millions and millions dustmites in his bed, pillow, and eyelashes kept him up with their unceasing choruses of "yum yum, eat 'em up" repeated over and over. And yet, the mites weren't enough to drown out the non-sexy come-ons from his lamp ("Oh baby, turn me on!"). Clouds told bad jokes, rainclouds just made awful puns. He comprehended the cosmic significance of cracks in the sidewalk, the meaning of the fluid shapes of puddles (mostly sad dirges), the long rambling conversations about wind patterns encapsulated in the flutterings of butterflies. Trees yawned constantly, counting their leaves and prattling on and on about soil moisture. And he understood it all, at full volume, all at once. Life was void of mystery, and as it turned out, the answers were fucking boring. Birds talked of nothing but air/weight ratios and berries. Grass just shouted "LIGHT!!!! WATER!!!!!" at the top of their chlorophyll lungs. Flowers were pretentious, vain assholes. Lightbulbs, looking down on everyone, were full of sarcastic judgment, and mountains just groaned like old people, forever complaining of this cliff aching, this hill landsliding. He became glad that he could not sleep, for he was terrified to fully comprehend his dreams. Nothing stopped talking, and her wish translated it for him in real time. The night sky was awash with the manic, grandiose lies of the stars, and the moon sang terrible Italian operas.

Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Safety First!

From the prompt: Take the phrase "Safety first" to the next level

Safety First!
by Dan Steinbacher

His father was an internationally famous crossing guard. His mother was a seatbelt designer for Volvo. They believed in prolonging their lives and preventing injury through whatever means necessary. It was only natural that they would name their child "Safety". In truth, his Mom and Dad didn't like Safety (the child) as much as they liked safety (the concept). And Safety the concept was unattainable, but they just simply ignored this fact. His, like most well-meaning but ultimately shortsighted parents, adopted "Safety First!" as the unofficial family motto. This meant that anything that seemed to them to be remotely dangerous would be tested by Safety first, to make sure it would not imperil his parents. The reasoning was that while the mother and father were safe, the family unit could continue to produce more test subjects, er, children, which kept their family bloodlines safe. To assuage what little guilt they might have felt, they got him a dog named Caution ("Safety first, use Caution!")

So when Volvo called upon his mother to design seatbelts for a space shuttle, it was Safety who blasted off into orbit by himself (well, nearly by himself, Caution came along) and did the field report for his mom. It was Safety who filled in for his scared father during a particularly difficult street crossing assignment in downtown Ho Chi Min City during rush hour. And it was Safety who had to take a bite of every meal the family ate to make sure it wasn't poisoned. And to check the house for lurking murderers when the family got home late. And to get rid of spiders that might be poisonous. And stick his head out into the road to see if cars were coming.

Safety didn't really mind this---it didn't occur to him to mind, since it had been that way since he was born. He had never been told he couldn't do something because it wasn't safe, he had been told TO do things specifically because they weren't safe, and consequently had a much different approach to the world in general. He just sort of went headlong into things…Safety as a concept didn't really apply to him, ironically enough.

Which is why it was so strange when he died. You'd have thought that with parents as terrified of the world as his, Safety would have been warned about pools and the ocean, or at least been taught to swim. But no, in their fear, his parents had avoided all water completely, and never told their son about it either. So when Safety finally came to the ocean one day after getting kicked off the boardwalk for unsafely juggling chainsaws at Venice beach, he had no idea what it was or what it did. He just walked straight in, without Caution, and drowned.

His parents named their next child--a girl--Curiosity, in the hopes that a subject, er, daughter with a voraciously inquisitive mind would be a little safer. They got her a kitten, too. Surely nothing could go wrong this time.

Monday, July 4, 2011

The Meaning of Life

Free Write from April 25, 2010 - Lindley Karstens
Like coffee grinds in the bottom of the mug, my brain is full of unfinished debris; outstanding research, stories that need endings or beginnings, pages and pages of verbal diarrhea requiring ruthless editing into some semblance of coherency, paintings in various stages of completion.  Nothing finished.  Nothing to give me that satisfied glow, that “aha!” moment when it’s all tidy and printed and done. 
Done.  That’s one of those concepts that compulsive souls like my own cling to in desperate hope that whatever it is that I’m getting up to do in the morning will come to have more meaning than the production of numbers in a bank account that permit me to continue to drag my bag of goodies through life without having to give anything back. 
Perhaps it would be a positive experience, this “giving it back”.  What do I need all the stuff for anyhow?  I have no idea but I'm convinced I need all kinds of things to organize more things.  Even with my Kindle I obsess about the need for a larger archive.  It holds a thousand books.  Is that all?  But in the wonderful world of floating electrons, magnetic charges, ones, zeros, on, off, I can possess all kinds of things and no trees have to die. 
Is that really true?  I guess not.  It takes energy to power servers, and fuel to keep mines going to produce the metal ores and minerals necessary to create skinny hard drives and raging chips.  Though I suppose I could make myself feel better by comparing the volume of resources consumed to produce a physical book versus an electronic book.  But in truth it’s all just stuff.  Maybe I should be practicing non-attachment, playing the toad in the middle of the room working out the perfect questions so I can get my damned cookie and go home having accomplished something.  Right?  Right.  Sure.
With gratitude to Sukha Gee for her fabulous Zen fairy tales and the toad that wasn't.